/* SAVE YOURSELF HOURS... /* IMPORT THESE COMMENTS INTO: SchoolReportWriter.COM /* No.1 in GOOGLE - "BEST TEACHER REPORTS APP": /* - TRUSTED by 1000s of teachers, since 2012 /* - QUICKLY create personalised reports /* - PASTE into your school system, Word etc /* - GENDER NEUTRAL option /* - DEMO video at SchoolReportWriter.COM /* FOR HELP see end of this document. /* Subjects: Accounting, Business Studies, Economics, Geography, History COMMENTS: AccYr10 Exam 02 1=#E should be very proud of this exam performance in which #e achieved highly across the topics and skills tested. 2=#E can be congratulated on this super exam performance which demonstrated a full range of Accounting knowledge and skills. 3=#E has done very well with the subject knowledge but needs to pay more attention to the calculation questions. 4=#E has done very well with the calculation questions but more regular reviewing will increase #h subject knowledge. 5=#H exam performance was affected by the gaps in knowledge due to incomplete work and a lack of effort to do well. 6=This disappointing exam result does not reflect #h ability in the subject and more through preparation should improve this in future. 7=This exam result is due to a consistently poor attitude to study even though help and support was given throughout the year. COMMENTS: AccYr10 Intro 01 1=#N has worked really hard to achieve #h best in all aspects of this new subject and has achieved highly. 2=#N has taken to Accounting exceptionally well showing a high level of skill working with financial data. 3=#N has not found all aspects of this course easy but has been proactive in asking for help and made good progress as a result. 4=#N has worked well in all aspects of the course and hands work in on time which has allowed #m to make steady progress. 5=#N has found some aspects of the course difficult and is learning the importance of paying attention to detail so as not to create errors. 6=#N has found Accounting difficult but has worked hard, asked for help and put advice into practice which will make it easier in time. 7=#N has struggled with completing work on time and so has found it hard to achieve #h best more effort in completing all tasks will help. 8=#N has not achieved all #e is capable of due to a poor attitude to learning, as the course progresses this will hold #m back considerably. COMMENTS: AccYr10 Skill - next 04 1=#E has demonstrated the ability to use sources of preparation of financial statements to good effect next #e needs to offer more evaluation of business performance. 2=#E has shown #e can master the preparation of financial statements now #e should practice comparing that data to the past year's data. 3=#E has shown #e can master in preparation of financial statements compare it to past year's data #e should now compare it to other businesses. 4=#E can present financial statements from the source of double entry book keeping, next #e should be able to interpret the data. 5=#E can understand the preparation and presentation of financial statements and adjustments, next #e should be able to draw conclusions from the statement. 6=#E can outline the uses and limitations of a trial balance, next #e needs to be able to prepare an outline from data. 7=#E can prepare a trial balance, next #e should be able to amend a balance which contains errors. 8=#E can correct errors by means of suspense accounts, next #e should understand the implications of the correct data for the business. COMMENTS: AccYr10 Topic 03 1=#E has shown particular skill in understanding of #TopicAcc. 2=#E has done some excellent work on #TopicAcc. 3=Although #e has worked well all year I was particularly pleased with #h understanding of #TopicAcc. 4=#E has demonstrated a sound grasp of #TopicAcc. 5=I was particularly pleased with the skill #e showed at #TopicAcc. 6=clicking #TopicAcc when you have pasted a sentence in the report will give you a drop down menu for topics COMMENTS: AccYr11 Exam 02 1=#E can be congratulated on #h excellent performance throughout the whole course which has let to this super exam result. 2=It was a pleasure to mark #h paper and see how much progress had been made since last year, the attention to detail was superb. 3=This exam result is well deserved and due to #h constant commitment to do #h best every step of the way and it bodes well for the summer. 4=#E can feel very pleased with the exam result which is clearly the result of a lot of practicing with past papers and learning from mistakes. 5=#E can be pleased with the answers concerning accounting practices, some more revision of the justification elements would pay off. 6=#E can be pleased with the grade achieved in the mock more time spent on evaluation of accounting practices would be of benefit. 7=This exam result is not a fair reflection of the work done during the year and more time spent revising is advisable before the final exam. 8=I am sure #e is disappointed with this exam result, but time spent correcting the mistakes and learning from them will pay off. 9=#E has done well with the practical calculation elements of the exam, more work needs to be done on interpreting accounts. 10=#E has shown sound knowledge in all areas of accounting practice, a little more attention to details with calculations is needed. COMMENTS: AccYr11 Intro 01 1=#N's dedication to every aspect of Accounting has let to these super grades, it has been a pleasure to teach #m. 2=#N has shown complete dedication to #h studies throughout the course and can be delighted with what #e has achieved. 3=#N has found some elements of accounting difficult and has worked hard to improve on those areas to great effect. 4=#N has struggled with technicalities of bookkeeping at times but due to #h perseverance #e has overcome these teething problems. 5=#N has made steady progress over the past two years and can build on this success with a final push before the actual exams. 6=#N has not always worked as hard as #e could and this has affected the grade #e is achieving, #e can learn from this and do better. 7=#N has not found Accounting easy but has always worked hard and #e can be pleased with what #e has achieved, and build on that. 8=#N has found the practical side of Accounting easier than the analysis of data, focussing on this for revision will help for the final exam. 9=#N has found it hard to concentrate and work to the best of #h ability throughout the course which has led to a disappointing result. 10=#N still has significant gaps in #h knowledge and only the most rigorous revision programme can help #m to achieve what #e is capable of. COMMENTS: AccYr11 Skill - next 04 1=#E has shown superb subject knowledge managing time in the exam is going to be important for the final exams. 2=#E has offered skilled analysis of accounts and ensuring their evaluations of them is as skillful will lead to more success. 3=#E has shown great skill in preparing accounts showing a better understanding of accounting principles would be even better. 4=#E has offered skilled analysis of accounts more work understanding the limitations of accounting statements would be good. 5=#E has shown some skill in the calculation and understanding of accounting ratios working on the interpretation of accounting ratios would be good. 6=#E has shown sound accountancy skills more focus on making adjustments appropriately would be even better, 7=#E has shown a sound grasp of the key areas of accounting, making sure #h practical skills are as good will raise #h attainment. 8=Has a good grasp of the key areas of accounting managing time in the exam is going to be key to achieving the deserved grade. 9=#E has some some promising work and now needs to make the most of the time left to build on this. COMMENTS: AccYr11 Topic 03 1=Work done on #TopicAcc stands out as particularly impressive. 2=#H understanding of #TopicAcc showed how much work #e had done on this. 3=It was pleasing to see how well #e did at #TopicAcc. 4=#E has really improved #h knowledge of #TopicAcc 5=It was great to see the skill shown in #TopicAcc. 6=#E can be very proud of #h answers on #TopicAcc. 7=clicking #TopicAcc when you have pasted a sentence in the report will give you a drop down menu for topics COMMENTS: Bus Yr11 Topic 03 1=#H work on #TopicBus showed great maturity. 2=#H work on #TopicBus was superb. 3=#H work on #TopicBus stood out for me. 4=#E can be proud of #h work on #TopicBus. 5=#E has shown a fair understanding of #TopicBus. 6=#H work on #TopicBus showed real skill. 7=#H work on #TopicBus demonstrated a deep understanding of the topic. 8=when you copy paste this into the report comment section you can click on #TopicBus for a list of topics on the course. COMMENTS: BusYr10 Exam 02 1=#E can be very proud of #h performance in the end of year exam scoring highly in all elements of the paper. 2=#E should be congratulated on this exam performance which shows thorough revision and sound understanding. 3=#E did particularly well at the data response in the exam, which enabled #m to do very well indeed. 4=#E clearly revised well and did particularly well with the short answer questions. 5=#E can be pleased with this exam result but more detailed reading of the case study might reduce the number of errors. 6=If #e improved #h revision technique #e would undoubtedly have done better in the exam. 7=Sadly this poor exam result reflects a poor attitude to work which has been a problem all year. 8=The exam result is disappointing, but it has identified areas for reinforcement and the need for regular reviewing. COMMENTS: BusYr10 Intro 01 1=#N has shown an excellent ability to achieve #h goals due to #h persistence and hard work. 2=#N can work independently and always completes #h homework and classwork on time. 3=#N is an enthusiastic member of the class, and #e often participates positively within group discussions. 4=#N takes the time to work things out for #s which is a quality that will really help #m to do well in Business Studies. 5=#N has had a mixed year but there are signs of improvement in #h attitude to learning of late. 6=#N has not put in sufficient effort in class to develop a strong understanding of the key elements of the course. 7=#N has shown an overall lack of effort which is reflected in #h average results. 8=#N has not shown much progression with #h understanding of Business Studies this term. 9=#N lacks confidence in the subject and as a result #e does not apply #s enough in class. 10=#N has shown an overall lack of effort which is reflected in #h poor results. COMMENTS: BusYr10 Skill - Next 04 1=#E has shown a superb understanding of Business concepts and can apply them with skill. #E can be congratulated on #h excellent work. 2=#E has got to be one of our most consistent students this year, always prepared, always attentive, and always contributes insightful answers to questions. 3=#H performance in class and on assessments has steadily improved over the course of the year, which is directly related to the focus #e has been bringing to class. 4=#E shows a good understanding of business ideas and practices, to improve #e should distinguish between evidence and opinion in a business context. 5=#E has worked well, to improve #e should practice analysing and interpreting information in narrative, numerical and graphical forms. 6=#H written work continues to develop, often work is done to a minimum standard and is handed in late, more commitment to #h studies is needed. 7=#E shows the makings of a good Business Studies student, but if #e wants to succeed in the subject #e must be less disruptive and show a greater commitment to #h work. 8=#H positive energy is infectious, and it rubs off on #h classmates who end up being more engaged due to #h presence and attitude. 9=#E can build on the success of this year by developing arguments, understanding implications and drawing inferences from case studies. 10=#E has not made good use of #h time this year and I suggest #e reviews #h work over the summer to improve #h grade next year. COMMENTS: BusYr10 Topic 03 1=#E has shown particular skill with #TopicBus. 2=A particular highlight has been work done on #TopicBus. 3=Work done on #TopicBus was particularly pleasing. 4=#E can be pleased with #h work on #TopicBus. 5=#E has clearly grasped the ideas of #TopicBus. 6=#E can build on #h success with #TopicBus. 7=#E clearly understands #TopicBus which is a good foundation on which to build. 8=when you copy paste this into the report comment section you can click on #TopicBus for a list of topics on the course. COMMENTS: BusYr11 Exam 02 1=#N works enthusiastically and often participates positively within group task and discussions and #h attitude enables #m to do well. 2=#N has confidence in #h achievements and is always ready and eager to learn more which has contributed to these super grades. 3=#N is a good student within the Business Studies class, and if #e continues to show the same commitment towards the subject there is no reason why #e should not obtain a very good GCSE this summer. 4=#N is a good student within the Business Studies class, and if #e continues like this #e should do well in the summer. 5=#N has confidence in #h achievements and is always ready and eager to learn more. 6=#N works to the best of #h ability, and tries hard to improve #h subject knowledge in Business Studies which has enabled #m to do well in the Mock exam. 7=#N works to the best of #h ability, and tries hard to improve #h subject knowledge in Business Studies which has enabled #m to attain this grade. 8=#N needs to show a considerable improvement in #h attitude towards #h studies if #e wants to pass #h GCSE examination. 9=#N has the ability to achieve a good GCSE grade, however if #e is to achieve this then #e needs to make a much greater effort before it is too late. 10=#N has made steady progress throughout the year, but #e needs to settle down and do some real work if #e wants to do well in GCSE Business Studies. COMMENTS: BusYr11 Intro 01 1=#N works enthusiastically and often participates positively within group task and discussions and #h attitude enables #m to do well. 2=#N has confidence in #h achievements and is always ready and eager to learn more which has contributed to these super grades. 3=#N is a good student within the Business Studies class, and if #e continues to show the same commitment towards the subject there is no reason why #e should not obtain a very good GCSE this summer. 4=#N is a good student within the Business Studies class, and if #e continues like this #e should do well in the summer. 5=#N has confidence in #h achievements and is always ready and eager to learn more. 6=#N works to the best of #h ability, and tries hard to improve #h subject knowledge in Business Studies which has enabled #m to do well in the Mock exam. 7=#N works to the best of #h ability, and tries hard to improve #h subject knowledge in Business Studies which has enabled #m to attain this grade. 8=#N needs to show a considerable improvement in #h attitude towards #h studies if #e wants to pass #h GCSE examination. 9=#N has the ability to achieve a good GCSE grade, however if #e is to achieve this then #e needs to make a much greater effort before it is too late. 10=#N has made steady progress throughout the year, but #e needs to settle down and do some real work if #e wants to do well in GCSE Business Studies. COMMENTS: BusYr11 Skill - next 04 1=#E has done well at interpreting tables and graphs, #e should use that information clearly in the evaluation in the summer exam. 2=#E is able to apply #h knowledge to different answers and is starting to offer detailed analysis which will improve #h grade. 3=#E can offer super analysis and evaluation of the case studies but should be guided by the mark scheme to maximise marks. 4=#E has shown the ability to analyse and evaluate the case studies, but more analysis and evaluation is needed. 5=#E has done well in many areas in the Mock exam, making corrections and thorough revision is now needed. 6=#E has made great progress over the year and thorough revision and practicing past papers will enable further success. 7=#E has at times fulfilled #h potential much more consistent effort will be needed if #e is not to be disappointed in the summer. 8=#E has shown promise on many occasions, now is the time to make good use of the time left to avoid disappointment in the summer. COMMENTS: BusYr11 Topic 03 1=#H work on #TopicBus showed great maturity. 2=#H work on #TopicBus was superb. 3=#H work on #TopicBus stood out for me. 4=#E can be proud of #h work on #TopicBus. 5=#E has shown a fair understanding of #TopicBus. 6=#H work on #TopicBus showed real skill. 7=#H work on #TopicBus demonstrated a deep understanding of the topic. 8=when you copy paste this into the report comment section you can click on #TopicBus for a list of topics on the course. COMMENTS: Concepts 1=#N has shown a #US understanding of #HC in #h coursework. 2=#N is developing an understanding of #HC in #h coursework. 3=#N has shown a #US understanding of #GC in #h coursework. 4=#N is developing an understanding of #GC in #h coursework. 5=#N is developing an understanding of #HC in ancient societies in #h coursework. 6=#N has shown a #US understanding of #BS. COMMENTS: EconYr10 Exam 02 1=#E has shown the ability to select, organise and interpret data but should improve on analysing economic issues and situations. 2=The exam demonstrated a good knowledge and understanding of economic definitions and concepts now #e needs to recognise patterns and relationships. 3=#E can use economic information and data to recognise patterns, next #e should also use it to deduce relationships. 4=The exam shows #e needs to be actively engaged, whether the focus is on the presentation or application of Economics content. 5=#E can select, organise and interpret data but #e needs to apply economic analysis with more skill. 6=#E has demonstrated some knowledge of the course content, however, evidence of understanding is limited. 7=Specific content knowledge of economic concepts, models and theories seem to be limited, especially when it comes to answering question papers. 8=#E needs to change #h attitude to Economics if #e is to avoid repeating this poor result next year. 9=#E may be feeling discouraged, the key is to pay close attention to feedback and undertake targeted revision in order to see real progress. 10=The exam showed some sound understanding, definitions continue to be a weak area, knowledge of key terms is essential. COMMENTS: EconYr10 Intro 01 1=#N has shown a high level of proficiency in analyzing and interpreting economic data and using the evidence gathered as a basis for problem solving. 2=#N seems equally comfortable with both micro and macroeconomics which is an essential part of the course. 3=#N continues to perform very well in economics and has demonstrated detailed knowledge and understanding of the course content. 4=#N has had a good start to the course and with attention to feedback and targeted revision #e should continue to see real progress. 5=#N has demonstrated a general understanding of economics, however, knowledge of economic concepts, models and theories needs work. 6=#N has faced some challenges at the start of the year and may be feeling discouraged. The key is to pay close attention to feedback. 7=#N's knowledge and understanding of economics is growing steadily and #e is making progress in the subject. 8=#N needs to devote more time to preparation outside of class. Since economics is a new subject for #m it is essential that #e complete work on time. 9=#N has found economics challenging, which is not uncommon since it is a new subject, it is important that #e takes measures now to overcome this. 10=#N has demonstrated some knowledge of the course content, however, evidence of understanding is limited #e needs to commit to #h studies. COMMENTS: EconYr10 Skill - next 04 1=Has shown a good understanding of role of markets in allocating resources, understanding the role of the price mechanism is the next step. 2=#E can draw and interpret a range of diagrams now #e should be able to draw illustrations along a demand curve. 3=#H work on interpreting the demand curve was very good now #e should make use of the appropriate terminology. 4=#H work on interpreting the supply curve was very good now #e should make use of the appropriate terminology. 5=#E understands the role of market equilibrium but should also examine the causes of disequilibrium. 6=#E is able to calculate PED using the formula, now #e needs to interpret the significance of the result 7=#E can discuss the influences on whether supply is elastic or inelastic, #e should now consider the implications for decision making. 8=#E can complete work when pressure is exerted but in order to succeed #e really needs to develop a more disciplined approach to learning. 9=#E has managed to develop sound knowledge of the topics we have studied but #e really needs to be able to draw substantiated conclusions. 10=#E needs to take a more mature approach to completing the work set and asking for help when it is needed. COMMENTS: EconYr10 TOPIC 03 1=#E has shown a thorough understanding of #TopicEcon. 2=#E has a real aptitude for examining #TopicEcon. 3=#E has discussed #TopicEcon with maturity. 4=#E has examined #TopicEcon well this term. 5=#E has done some pleasing work on #TopicEcon. 6=#E can be commended for #h work on #TopicEcon. 7=#E has shown #e can grasp #TopicEcon and should build on that. 8=When you copy paste this comment into the report comment section you can click on #TopicEcon for a list of topics on the course. COMMENTS: EconYr11 Exam 02 1=Constant revision and question paper practice will help #m to improve #h current grade to an A. 2=#E has shown a good level of knowledge in the exam but should draw on different aspects of the course for higher mark questions 3=#E has demonstrated a general understanding of economics, however, specific knowledge of economic concepts, models and theories seem to be limited. 4=#E has shown a good understanding of #e case studies but needs to refer to the specific details in the information to support #h judgements. 5=In order for #m to improve #h mark, #e needs to do much more revision at home and #e needs to ensure that #e understands the content. 6=#H understanding is good but #e must use the appropriate subject specific vocabulary and key terminology to gain higher marks. 7=#E has superb subject knowledge but needs to distinguish between economic analysis and unreasoned statements. 8=#E should take every opportunity to act on the feedback #e has been given and make time to revise regularly and thoroughly. COMMENTS: EconYr11 Intro 01 1=#N works enthusiastically and often participates positively within group task and discussions. 2=#N has confidence in #h achievements and is always ready and eager to learn more. 3=#N is a good student in the class, and if #e continues to show this commitment there is no reason why #e should not get a very good IGCSE grade. 4=#N is a very able student who has worked hard throughout the course. #E is thoughtful and conscientious and has excelled in Economics this year. 5=If #N can continue with #h positive attitude, I am sure that there is nothing that can stop #m maintaining an A grade at the end of the year. 6=#N's performance has varied. Even so, overall there has been real growth in #N's confidence within Economics. 7=#N has made steady progress throughout the term. #N needs to settle down and do some real work if #e wants to do well in IGCSE Economics. 8=#N has demonstrated a general understanding of economics, however, specific knowledge of economic concepts, models and theories seem to be limited. 9=#N needs to show a considerable improvement in #h attitude towards #h work if #e wants to pass #h final IGCSE. COMMENTS: EconYr11 Skill - next 04 1=#E knows reasons for adopting the different forms of production now #e should examine their advantages and disadvantages. 2=#E was able to examine the roles of the private sector and the public sector in a market economy, #e should now compare different countries. 3=#E can explain the reasons for adopting the different forms of production next #e should examine the advantages and disadvantages. 4=#E Has done some excellent work using a variety of data in graphic forms and is beginning to use them to make judgements. 5=#E can compare and contrast different market types it is important to evaluate their characteristics in more depth. 6=#E understands macroeconomic aims for government but needs to examine the reasons behind the criteria that governments set for each aim. 7=#E has built a good foundation of knowledge but should practice different styles of question in preparation for the final exam. 8=#E should make sure #e can discuss the effects of fiscal policy on on consumers, producers, government and economy as a whole. 9=#E needs to find some self discipline and review thoroughly in order to build on this exam grade in the final. 10=#E should use the feedback from the mock to set up thorough and targeted revision timetable for the final exams. 11=Constant revision and question paper practice will help #e to improve #h current grade to an A. COMMENTS: EconYr11 Topic 03 1=The work #e did on #TopicEcon was superb. 2=The understanding #e showed of #TopicEcon was impressive. 3=#E has worked hard to examine #TopicEcon. 4=#E did really well with #TopicEcon and can be encouraged by this. 5=#E should build on #h success with #TopicEcon to raise #h level. 6=#E has done some satisfactory work on #TopicEcon. 7=#E has grasped #TopicEcon and more effort will see #m achieve much more. 8=When you copy paste this comment into the report comment section you can click on #TopicEcon for a list of topics on the course. COMMENTS: EconyYr11 Topic 03 1=The work #e did on #TopicEcon was superb. 2=The understanding #e showed of #TopicEcon was impressive. 3=#E has worked hard to examine #TopicEcon. 4=#E did really well with #TopicEcon and can be encouraged by this. 5=#E should build on #h success with #TopicEcon to raise #h level. 6=#E has done some satisfactory work on #TopicEcon. 7=#E has grasped #TopicEcon and more effort will see #m achieve much more. 8=When you copy paste this comment into the report comment section you can click on #TopicEcon for a list of topics on the course. COMMENTS: GeogYr 7 Contribution Exam- 02 1=#E has contributed a great deal to the class and provided valuable input to discussions. 2=#E has contributed well thought out ideas to the class and always provides valuable input to discussions. 3=#E has contributed in most lessons to the class and provided some valuable input to discussions. 4=#E has contributed satisfactorily to the class and provided some valuable input to discussions. 5=#E has contributed very little to the class and provided some input to discussions. 6=This exam grade is the result of doing #h best all year and revising thoroughly. 7=#H answers for the exam showed super knowledge and understanding of geographical processes. 8=#E can be proud of #h achievements in this exam and the work done throughout the year. 9=A lack of revision has meant that the exam has not done justice to all #e has achieved this year. 10=The exam showed some good understanding it is a pity that gaps in #h knowledge let #m down in places. 11=#E may feel upset with #e exam result but #e should be pleased with the work done throughout the year and work on revision techniques. 12=Reviewing more regularly will help to build #h understanding and aid revision for the end of year exam. 13=Sadly this exam result reflects the poor quality of work done all year despite one to one help in class. COMMENTS: GeogYr7 Intro - 01 1=#N has worked hard and made excellent progress this year. 2=#N has worked well and made pleasing progress this year. 3=#N has worked steadily most of the time and made fair progress this year. 4=#N has often worked well and made satisfactory progress this year. 5=#N has not worked as well as #e could and #e has made some progress this year. 6=#N has found it difficult to work well even with support and #e has made very little progress this year. COMMENTS: GeogYr7 Content - 03 1=#E has produced some particularly excellent work on #GCont this year. 2=#H work on #GCont was superb and showed an in depth understanding. 3=#H work on #GCont was an achievement and #e should be encouraged by that. 4=Work on #GCont demonstrated what #e is capable of and a more consistent approach would see #h grade improve. 5=The work done on #GCont stood out for me this year, #e can be congratulated on its quality. COMMENTS: GeogYr7 Skill - next 04 1=#E can be delighted with the range of Geography skills #e has shown this year and #e will be well prepared to enjoy the year 8 course. 2=#E can be proud of a lot of work done this year and with some added attention to detail #e will be an excellent geographer. 3=#E has excelled in the physical and human geography of the Horn of Africa which sets an excellent foundation for next year. 4=#E has developed a sound understanding of river processes and will enjoy discovering about coasts next year. 5=#E has done some super presentations and shown a good understanding of physical geography which will stand #m in good stead. 6=There were some real highlights of the year but also some disappointing work, hopefully #h attitude to work will improve next year. 7=#H knowledge and understanding are super, more time spent learning the key words and terms will give #m more confidence. 8=#E did some good work at times this year but needs to review over the summer and prepare to have a different attitude next year. 9=#E will need to develop more independent study habits if #e is to achieve all #e is capable of. 10=#H progress was affected by #h poor attitude to work and hopefully #e will realise this and be determined to achieve #h best. 11=It is a pity that #h poor work ethic prevented #m from making satisfactory progress this year #e will need to address this. COMMENTS: GeogYr8 Content 03 1=Has produced some particularly excellent work on #GCont this year. 2=The work done on #GCont stood out for me this year, #e can be congratulated on its excellence. 3=In a year of pleasing work the work done on #GCont was really impressive. 4=#H work on #GCont was superb. It was very detailed and beautifully produced. 5=Work on #GCont demonstrated what #e is capable of. A more consistent approach would see more of work like this and #h grade would improve. 6=It is a shame that the success of work done on #GCont did not encourage #m to achieve more with other topics. 7=When you copy the comment into the report comment you can click #GCont and get a dropdown list. COMMENTS: GeogYr8 Exam 02 1=Not alone has #e worked hard all year but #e has clearly revised well to and can be proud of this exam result. 2=Hard work and dedication have been the hallmarks of this year and this superb exam result is well deserved. 3=#E can be very pleased with this exam performance which shows a good grasp of what we have covered this year. 4=#E might be disappointed with this exam result but more regular and organised revision in future would improve this. 5=This exam result shows what #e is capable of and I hope we see that level of commitment in #h work throughout year next year. 6=This exam showed some areas of confusion and it is important that next year #e asked for help when #e is confused with a topic. 7=This exam result is a fair reflection of the progress made this year although #e is capable of so much more, #e needs to work harder during the year. 8=I hope this exam result prompts #m to reflect on the year and make some important changes as #e goes into year 9. COMMENTS: GeogYr8 Intro 01 1=It has been a delight to teach #N as #e has worked enthusiastically and to the best of #h ability throughout the year. 2=#N has contributed wholeheartedly to all aspects of the course and consistently produced work of the highest standard. 3=#N has worked to the best of #h ability for each topic and continued to make excellent progress in Geography. 4=#N has at times produced excellent work and needs to have a more consistent approach to #h learning in order achieve more. 5=#N has at times shown what #e is capable of. It is a shame #h attitude to learning is so variable as this affects #h progress. 6=When #N likes the topic #e can produce some great work, sadly when #e is less committed the quality of #h work suffers. 7=#N has at times produced pleasing work but finds it hard to work independently and can disturb others. #E needs to focus more in class. 8=#N has needed a lot of support to produce work and #e needs to improve #h work ethic if #e is to make the progress #e is capable of. 9=#N has had a lot of reminders about behaviour and work expectations and it is essential that these improve if #e is to make any progress. COMMENTS: GeogYr8 Skill - next 04 1=#H ability to show geographical information in a variety of ways was impressive, #e now needs to make sure it is always accurate. 2=#E has shown skill in both human and physical geography which is super preparation for year 9. 3=#E has struggled with human geography a little but #h understanding of geographical processes was superb. 4=#E has shown an excellent ability to draw conclusions from population data, and this will help #m with the work in year 9. 5=#E can describe different geographical processes but finds it hard to consider solutions to the problems they cause. This will come with practice. 6=#E has made steady progress but undoubtedly with more effort #e could do so much better. 7=#E should take heart from #h achievements. When #e concentrates more on #h work and completes it, #e will achieve so much more. 8=#E has not made the progress #e is capable of and needs to improve #h work ethic if #e is to fulfil #h potential in this subject. 9=#E has shown what #e can do when #e has one to one help from the teacher making sure #e concentrates. Going into year 9 #e needs to show more self-discipline. 10=The only thing holding #m back from making more progress is #h poor attitude to #h studies, #e needs to show more maturity next year. COMMENTS: HisYr 10 Intro 01 1=#N has settled into the IGCSE History course with ease and is producing work of a high standard. 2=#N has worked hard and is adjusting to the rigors of IGCSE work with some very pleasing results. 3=#N can be very proud of #h achievements in History this year working well with the new rigors or IGCSE. 4=#N has worked steadily and made pleasing progress #e has contributed well to all aspects of the course. 5=#N has found some aspects of the course difficult but has been proactive in seeking advice and putting it into practice. 6=#N has not really made the adjustment to the demands of studying an IGCSE History course which has affected #h progress. 7=#N has struggled with the requirements of studying History at IGCSE and needs to complete all work set to make satisfactory progress. 8=#N has needed a lot of support to complete work to a satisfactory standard and needs to address #h poor attitude to work in order to succeed. COMMENTS: HisYr10 Exam 02 1=#E can be extremely pleased with #h performance across the exam paper tacking different styles of questions successfully. 2=#E has shown a thorough knowledge of all the topics in the exam paper and demonstrated great exam technique. 3=#E has done well at answering questions on more recent topics in the exam which indicates what #e is capable of. 4=#E has been very successful with the short answer questions and more revision will help with the longer questions. 5=#E has shown a good range of knowledge in the exam, paying more attention to the mark scheme could prove useful. 6=This is a disappointing exam result and does not reflect the quality of work produced throughout the year. 7=This poor exam result is a reflection of a lack of produced throughout the year even with extra support. 8=#H should not be discouraged by the exam result but regular reviewing of the topics will help in future. 9=This exam result is due to the considerable gaps in #h knowledge due to #h poor work ethic. 10=This exam results shows a lack of commitment to the demands of GCSE level studies. COMMENTS: HisYr10 Skill - next 04 1=#E has demonstrated the ability to fully understand, interpret, evaluate and use a range of sources as evidence. He/she needs to offer more detailed analysis. 2=#E has shown #e can master the use of a range of sources as evidence to good effect. Familiarity with the mark scheme will help to gain more marks. 3=#E can give some demonstration of being able to understand, interpret, evaluate and use a range of sources as evidence. 4=When #e completes work, it is clear that #e understands the basic concepts of using sources and is able to attempt to answer questions. 5=#E has worked hard to improve #h skills with evaluating sources familiarity with the marking criteria will help to develop this further. 6=#E has demonstrated good subject knowledge now #e needs to make sure #e can answer questions efficiently in the time given. 7=#E should spend more time reviewing the topics that #e finds more difficult and ask for help when #e needs it. 8=#E has answered the shorter answers to good effect but a stronger work ethic is needed if #e is to achieve #h best with longer answers. COMMENTS: HisYr10 Topic 03 1=#H work on #TopicHist was of a particularly high standard and #e can build on this success. 2=#H examination of #TopicHist was a highlight and shows what #e can achieve. 3=#H work on #TopicHist was very good and #e should keep on building those skills for other topics. 4=#H work on #TopicHist was particularly skillful and shows what #e can do with a more consistent approach. 5=#H work on #TopicHist shows what #e is capable of and #e should be encouraged by that. 6=#H work on #TopicHist shows what can be done when #e makes the effort to complete the work. 7=Although work done on #TopicHist was encouraging more effort is needed if #e is to achieve what #e is capable of. 8=#TopicHist will give you a drop down list of topics on the course for you to choose from when you copy and paste the sentence into report writer. COMMENTS: HisYr11 Exam 02 1=#E can be extremely pleased with #h performance across the exam papers tackling the different styles of questions successfully. 2=#E has shown a thorough knowledge of all the topics in the exam paper and demonstrated great exam technique. 3=#E has done well answering questions on more recent topics in the exam which indicates what #e is capable of with more thorough revision. 4=#E has been very successful with the short answer questions and more revision will help with the longer questions. 5=#E has shown a good range of knowledge in the exam, paying more attention to the mark scheme could prove useful. 6=This is a disappointing exam result and does not reflect the quality of work produced throughout these past years. 7=This poor exam result is a reflection of a lack of produced throughout these past two years even with extra support. 8=#H should not be discouraged by the exam result but take the time to prepare thoroughly for the areas of weakness it showed. 9=This exam result is due to the considerable gaps in #h knowledge due to #h poor work ethic, a serious revision programme will help. 10=This exam results shows a lack of commitment to the demands of GCSE level studies, #e must make full use of the time left to do better. COMMENTS: HisYr11 Intro 01 1=It has been a pleasure to teach #N IGCSE History, #e has been committed to every aspect of the course and done #h best to succeed in all areas. 2=#N should be congratulated on #h positive attitude and commitment to the course over the past two and #e can be very pleased with all #e has achieved. 3=#N has worked hard to achieve all that #e can in all aspects of the course and can be proud of what #e has achieved. 4=#N has found some aspects of the course challenging but has worked hard to overcome these difficulties and do well. 5=#N has made excellent progress throughout the course going from strength to strength and should be congratulated for #h persistence. 6=#N has made some progress over the past two years but really needs a more consistent approach in order to achieve #h potential in the final exams. 7=#N has produced work of mixed quality over the past two years and now #e should make each piece of work count so #e can do #h best in the final exams. 8=#N has struggled with History but reviewing and practice can enable #m to achieve #h best in the final exam. COMMENTS: HisYr11 Skill - next 04 1=#E has shown super subject knowledge with the short answer questions, #e should take time to read the question carefully to answer it precisely. 2=#E has worked hard over the past years, it is important to pay attention to the dates in the question so as to answer it precisely. 3=#E has shown great subject knowledge, remembering to explain and use evidence will ensure higher grades. 4=#E has shown excellent subject knowledge but time management is key to ensuring there is enough time for higher mark questions. 5=#E has done really well with examining sources it is essential that #e keeps the question in mind when answering the higher marked questions. 6=#E can be proud of all that #e has achieved this year, #e can do better with paper 4 by referring to the question in each paragraph. 7=#E has found the subject difficult, but has kept trying, careful revision and answering the question precisely will help in the final exams. 8=#E has shown some sound skills in History, a rigorous revision programme will help #m achieve #h best. COMMENTS: HisYr11 topic 03 1=#H work on #TopicHist was of a particularly high standard and #e can build on this success in other areas. 2=#H examination of #TopicHist was a highlight and shows what #e can achieve in other areas. 3=#H work on #TopicHist was very good and #e should keep on building those skills for other topics. 4=#H work on #TopicHist was particularly skillful and shows what #e can do with a more consistent approach. 5=#H work on #TopicHist shows what #e is capable of and #e should be encouraged by that going into the final exams. 6=#H work on #TopicHist shows what can be done when #e makes the effort to complete the work. 7=Although work done on #TopicHist was encouraging more effort is needed if #e is to achieve what #e is capable of. 8=#TopicHist will give you a drop down list of topics on the course for you to choose from when you copy and paste the sentence into report writer. COMMENTS: HisYr7 Content 03 1=Work done on #HCont was particularly outstanding showing a real understanding of medieval defences. 2=The project on #HCont was a particular highlight of the year’s work. 3=#E showed an excellent understanding of #HCont , producing work of a very high standard. 4=Work done on #HCont was particularly pleasing showing good progress was made this year. 5=#E has produced some super work on #HCont showing a good use of sources. 6=#HCont gives you a dropdown list of topics covered this year when you select the sentence and put it in the report COMMENTS: HisYr7 Exam 02 1=#E can be very pleased with #h exam performance across all the topics covered. 2=#H exam paper demonstrated an excellent understanding of a range of topics. 3=This is a pleasing exam result but more attention to the mark scheme could have gained #m more marks in places. 4=#H exam paper showed a good range of knowledge but more revision would have been beneficial. 5=#H exam answers are not a fair reflection of all that was achieved this year, improving #h revision technique will reap rewards. 6=#H exam performance was hampered by a poor attitude to work throughout the year leading to gaps in #h knowledge. 7=#E should not be discouraged by the exam result, regular reviewing of the topics throughout the year will help in future. 8=This exam disappointing result is due to the considerable gaps in #h knowledge due to #h poor work ethic. 9=A disappointing exam result but a fair reflection of the little work done this year and a negative attitude to learning. COMMENTS: HisYr7 Intro 01 1=#N has worked really hard this year, contributing fully to all aspects of the course. 2=#N should be congratulated on an excellent year’s work across all the topics we have studied. 3=#N has worked consistently well ensuring work is handed in on time and completed to a high standard. 4=#N has produced a lot of very pleasing work this year and contributed well to many aspects of the course. 5=#N has found some aspects of the course difficult but this has not stopped #m from working hard. 6=#N has struggled to complete work and hand it in on time which has affected #h progress. 7=#N has struggled to work independently though #e is capable of doing good quality work when pressured to do so. 8=#N has continually needed me to support #m during every lesson in order to produce any work. COMMENTS: HisYr7 Skill-Next 04 1=#E has demonstrated the ability to use sources to good effect next #e needs to offer more evaluation of source material. 2=#E has shown that #e can understand the reasons for changes over time next #e needs to comment on the most important reasons for the changes. 3=#E can give some reasons for why things change over time it would be even better if these were more fully explained. 4=#E can describe the changes that take place over time, it would be even better if #e could say why these changes happened. 5=When #e completes work #e can describe how things have changed over time. It is vital that all work is complete and handed in on time COMMENTS: HisYr8 Content 03 1=Although work was of a consistently high standard all year #h examination of #HCont was very impressive. 2=Much of the work done this year was of a high standard but #h work on #HCont was a particular highlight. 3=#E can be particularly proud of #h work on #HCont . 4=#E produced some excellent work on #HCont this year. 5=#E has produced some super work on #HCont . 6=#HCont gives you a dropdown list of topics covered this year when you select the sentence and put it in the report COMMENTS: HisYr8 Exam 02 1=#E has achieved a super exam grade succeeding in all areas of the exam paper and this is solely due to #h hard work and dedication. 2=This exam result shows a good grasp of most of the areas we have studied throughout the year. 3=Some areas of the exam paper were well answered, more through revision in all topics would have given a better result. 4=#H exam answers demonstrated a good level of knowledge but more attention needs to be paid to questions with higher marks. 5=Gaps in knowledge and missing work throughout the year has clearly affected #h exam performance. 6=This exam result is a little disappointing, but regular reviewing will improve #h performance in the future. 7=It is a shame that more effort was not put into classwork throughout the year as the lack of completed classwork has led to poor exam performance as well. 8=Paying more attention in lessons and completing all the work set will no doubt also improve the final exam grade in History. COMMENTS: HisYr8 Intro 01 1=#N can be congratulated on a very successful year this year having excelled in all aspects of the course. 2=#N has worked to the best of #h ability and consistently produced outstanding work. 3=#N has worked with enthusiasm whatever the task or topic this, coupled with continued hard work, has meant it has been a great year in History. 4=#N has been committed to all aspects of the course, #e has made steady progress throughout the year and in all the topics we have covered. 5=#N has worked well throughout this year and made steady but pleasing progress. 6=#N has not found year 8 History very easy but has always done #h best to make improvements and act on advice. 7=#N has produced some work of a pleasing quality but too often #h work has been incomplete or barely started without considerable support. 8=#N has not found the course easy and has not really made the effort needed to make progress, even with one to one support. 9=#N has not produced any work unless I have sat with #m to guide #m and keep #m focused on the lesson. COMMENTS: HisYr8 Skill - Next 04 1=#E is beginning to examine the reasons for key events in history and should learn to evaluate which of these are the most and least important. 2=#E has been able to evaluate the consequences of key events in history with skill reaching a well supported conclusion. 3=#E has shown a good understanding of the reasons for changes over time next #e needs to evaluate them. 4=#E can explain how key events in History came about, being able to put these causes in order of importance is the next step. 5=#E can explain what historical sources show us, more explanation of what they can teach us would be even better. 6=Making sure all work is completed on time and to the best of #h ability will improve #h understanding of why key events happened. COMMENTS: HisYr9 Content 03 1=Although work done throughout the year was of a consistently high standard #h ability to use sources to examine #HCont was a real highlight. 2=Much of the work #e did this year was of a high standard but #h examination of #HCont stands out as particularly impressive. 3=#E can be particularly proud of #h work done on exploring #HCont which was showed a real depth of understanding of the time. 4=#E produced some pleasing work on #HCont which #e can be very satisfied with, as it showed #h ability to make judgements using supporting evidence. 5=#E as produced some pleasing work on #HCont and #e should build on that success of evaluating the reasons for particular events in history. 6=#E has had times participating well and often demonstrated sound knowledge particularly with #HCont, unfortunately inconsistencies with completing work has let #m down at times. 7=As the year has progressed #e has gained confidence with using sources and presenting #h own viewpoint, this was very pleasing when #e examined #HCont 8=With teacher support and encouragement #e can focus and has made some progress particularly on #HCont. 9=#H work on #HCont was a highlight as #e made good effort to complete the work to the best of #h ability, if #e made the effort more consistently #h would reap the rewards. 10=When you copy the sentence into the report comments you can click on #HCont for a list of subject content. COMMENTS: HisYr9 Exam 02 1=This exam result is a superb achievement which is due to #h admirable work ethic throughout the year and clearly shows thorough exam preparation. 2=This exam result is the result of a year of consistently high quality work and also time taken to review and prepare for the exam. 3=This exam result is particularly pleasing as it shows a high level of understanding across all the topics studied. 4=Some areas of the exam paper were well answered however more through revision in all topics would have given a better result. 5=The exam answers demonstrated a good level of knowledge but more time and attention needs to be paid to questions with higher marks. 6=Gaps in knowledge and missing work throughout the year has clearly affected #h exam performance. 7=This exam result is a little disappointing, but regular reviewing will improve #h performance in the future. 8=It is a shame that more effort was not put into classwork throughout the year as the lack of understanding and practice has led to poor exam performance. 9=Paying more attention in lessons and completing all the work set will no doubt also improve the final exam grade. COMMENTS: HisYr9 Intro 01 1=#N Has worked to the best of #h ability throughout the year in order to achieve at the highest level in all aspects of the course. 2=#N works with enthusiasm and dedication in all aspects of the course and consistently produces high quality work. 3=#N works hard and always produces work of a good standard acting on advice about how to improve. 4=#N has shown commitment and dedication to all aspects of the course ensuring all work is of a high standard. 5=#N has found some aspects of the course challenging but has consistently worked well to make steady progress. 6=#N has made some progress work generally producing work of a satisfactory standard and contributing well to different learning activities. 7=#N does not find the subject easy but would undoubtedly make more progress with more hard work and consistent approach to learning activities. 8=#N has needed support in order to complete work. When work is completed it shows promise and these successes can be built on with more effort. 9=#N has found that as the work gets more challenging a more consistent approach to completing work is necessary in order to make progress. 10=#N has still needed a lot of one to one support to get any work completed. This poor attitude to #h studies is holding #m back from achieving #h potential. COMMENTS: HisYr9 skill-next 04 1=#E is able to identify the causes of main events and is beginning to be able to prioritise them. 2=#E has is able to identify the effects of key events in History and is starting to to identify the most important ones. 3=#E can examine historical sources and consider how biased they may be and #e is beginning to decide if they are still useful or not. 4=#E can use sources to support a discussion of historical events, more evaluation of their limitations would be even better. 5=#E must ask for help when it is needed and also ensure that all work is completed on time. COMMENTS: Humanites Yr7 Intro 01 1=#N has worked really hard this year, contributing fully to all aspects of the course, #h positive attitude to humanities is superb. 2=#N can be congratulated on a very successful year this year having excelled in all aspects of the course. 3=#N has worked to the best of #h ability and consistently produced outstanding work in all areas of history and geography. 4=#N should be congratulated on an excellent year’s work across all the topics we have studied #e has worked to the best of #h ability throughout the year. 5=#N has worked consistently well ensuring work is handed in on time and completed to a high standard and as a result can be pleased with what #h has achieved. 6=#N has produced a lot of very pleasing work this year and contributed well to many aspects of the history and geography units. 7=#N has worked with enthusiasm whatever the task or topic this, coupled with continued hard work, has meant it has been a great year in Humanities for #h. 8=#N has been committed to all aspects of the course, #e has made steady progress throughout the year and in all the topics we have covered. 9=#N has worked well throughout this year and made steady but pleasing progress in most of the topics we have studied. 10=#N has not found humanities very easy but has always done #h best to make improvements and act on advice. 11=#N has found some aspects of the course difficult but this has not stopped #m from working hard, asking for help and doing #h best. 12=#N has produced some work of a pleasing quality but too often #h work has been incomplete or barely started without considerable support. 13=#N has regularly struggled to complete work, even with extra support. #H often forgets to complete work or hand work in on time which has affected #h progress. 14=#N has struggled to work independently throughout the year even though #e is capable of doing good quality work when pressured to do so. 15=#N has not found the course easy and has not really made the effort needed to make progress, even with one to one support. 16=#N has continually needed me to support #m during every lesson in order to produce any work, despite offering tips and strategies #h has not really been able to work independently. 17=#N has not produced any work unless I have sat with #m to guide #m and keep #m focused on the lesson. COMMENTS: Humanities Intro 01 1=#N has worked really hard this year, contributing fully to all aspects of the course, #h positive attitude to humanities is commendable. 2=#N can be congratulated on a very successful year this year having excelled in all aspects of the course. 3=#N has worked to the best of #h ability and consistently produced outstanding work in all areas of history and geography. 4=#N should be congratulated on an excellent year’s work across all the topics we have studied and in all the tasks set. 5=#N has worked consistently well, ensuring work is handed in on time and completed to a high standard and can be pleased with what #h has achieved. 6=#N has produced a lot of very pleasing work this year and contributed well to many aspects of the history and geography units. 7=#N has worked with enthusiasm whatever the task or topic. This, coupled with continued hard work, has meant it has been a great year in Humanities for #h. 8=#N has been committed to all aspects of the course, #e has made steady progress throughout the year and in all the topics we have covered. 9=#N has worked well throughout this year and made steady but pleasing progress in most of the topics we have studied and tasks set. 10=#N has not found humanities very easy but has always done #h best to make improvements and act on advice. This has enabled #h to make steady progress. 11=#N has found some aspects of the course difficult but this has not stopped #m from working hard, asking for help and doing #h best. 12=#N has produced some work of a pleasing quality but too often #h work has been incomplete or barely started without considerable support. 13=#N has regularly struggled to complete work, even with extra support. #E often forgets to complete work or hand work in on time which has affected #h progress. 14=#N has struggled to work independently throughout the year even though #e is capable of doing good quality work when pressured to do so. 15=#N has not found the course easy and has not really made the effort needed to make progress, even with one to one support. 16=#N has continually needed support during every lesson in order to produce any work, despite offering tips and strategies. 17=#N has not produced any work unless I have sat with #m to guide #m and keep #m focused on the task and this has really affected #h progress. COMMENTS: Humanities EBI 05 1=#E can be delighted with the range of humanities skills shown this year and should continue to review topics regularly to keep up this standard . 2=#E can be proud of a lot of work done this year. More attention to the key words in questions will help #m to keep to the point in #h answers. 3=#E has done really well and asking for clarification when #e is confused will no doubt improve #h performance in the future. 4=#E has developed a sound understanding during the course this year, offering more supporting facts in #h answers will improve #h performance in the future. 5=#E has done some super work and shown a good understanding of the topics covered, using more examples in #h answers will improve #h performance. 6=There were some real highlights this year but also some disappointing work, hopefully #h attitude to work will be more consistent next year. 7=#H knowledge and understanding is superb, more time spent learning the key words and terms will give #m more confidence. 8=#E did some good work at times this year but needs to review over the summer and prepare to have a different attitude next year. 9=#E will need to develop more independent study habits if #e is to achieve all #e is capable of. 10=#H progress was affected by #h poor attitude to work and hopefully #e will realise this and be determined to perform to the best of #h ability. 11=It is a pity that #h poor work ethic prevented #m from making satisfactory progress this year, #e will need to start with a fresh outlook next year. COMMENTS: Humanities Exam 04 1=#E can be very pleased with #h exam performance across all the topics covered this year. 2=#H exam paper demonstrated an excellent understanding of a range of topics studied this year. 3=This is a pleasing exam result but more attention to the mark scheme could have gained #m more marks in places. 4=#H exam paper showed a good range of knowledge but more revision of topics studied earlier in the year would have been wise. 5=#H exam answers are not a fair reflection of all that was achieved this year, improving #h revision technique will reap rewards. 6=#H exam performance was hampered by a poor attitude to work throughout the year leading to gaps in #h knowledge. 7=#E should not be discouraged by the exam result, regular reviewing of the topics throughout the year will help in future. 8=This disappointing exam result is due to the considerable gaps in #h knowledge due to #h poor work ethic. 9=A disappointing exam result but a fair reflection of the little work done this year and a negative attitude to learning. COMMENTS: Humanities Geog Content 02 1=#E has produced some particularly excellent work on #GCont, showing a detailed understanding of how humans can affect the world we live in. 2=The work done on #GCont showed a comprehensive knowledge of how natural processes shape the land. 3=In a year of pleasing work the work done on #GCont was really impressive showing a detailed understanding of human geography. 4=#H work on #GCont was superb, #e worked hard to ensure #e had a thorough understanding of the physical geography we have studied. 5=#H work on #GCont was superb, #e worked hard to ensure #e had a thorough understanding of the natural processes we have studied. 6=A highlight of the year in geography was the work #e did on #GCont which showed excellent skills in using data to help us understand our world. 7=Work done on #GCont demonstrated what #e is capable of. A more consistent approach would see more work like this and higher grades. 8=#H work on #GCont was a super achievement and #e should be encouraged by that success in the future. 9=It is a shame that the success of work done on #GCont did not encourage #m to achieve more with other topics. 10=When you copy the comment into the report comment you can click #GCont and get a dropdown list. COMMENTS: Humanities Hist Content 03 1=Although work done throughout the year was of a consistently high standard #h ability to use sources to examine #HCont was a real highlight. 2=Much of the work #e did this year was of a high standard but #h examination of #HCont stands out as particularly impressive. 3=#E can be particularly proud of #h work done on exploring #HCont which showed a real depth of understanding of the time period. 4=#E produced some good work on #HCont which #e can be pleased with, as it showed #h ability to make judgements using supporting evidence. 5=#E has produced some pleasing work on #HCont and #e should evaluate the reasons for particular events happening when they did in history. 6=#E has participated well at times and demonstrated some knowledge particularly with #HCont, unfortunately this was not consistent. 7=As the year has progressed #e has gained confidence with presenting #h own viewpoint, this was very pleasing when #e examined #HCont. 8=With teacher support and encouragement #e can focus and has made some progress particularly on #HCont. 9=#H work on #HCont was a highlight as #e made a real effort to work to the best of #h ability, more consistent effort would reap the rewards. 10=When you copy the sentence into the report comments you can click on #HCont for a list of subject content. COMMENTS: Online learning 1=#E can be commended for #h excellent work ethic as the lessons moved online, #e is always punctual and well prepared for lessons. 2=#E should be very proud of #h attitude to online classes, #e is always ready to learn and willing to make great contributions to the lesson. 3=#E has been able to switch effortlessly from face to face lessons to online learning and #e has shown this important skill consistently all year. 4=It is to #h credit that moving to online classes did not affect #m at all. #H excellent attitude to learning shone through online as it did in class. 5=#E has made the adjustment to online classes with ease contributing well to lessons, completing work on time and to a high standard. 6=#E has not let the move to online learning hold #m back, #e has continued to work hard and ask for clarification or help when it was needed. 7=#E does not find it easy to be self-disciplined and this was particularly the case with online lessons where #e needed reminders to complete the work. 8=Online learning requires organisation and self-discipline which #e has struggled with and this has meant that #e needed reminders and support to get work done. 9=Despite reminders and offers of help #e has not done justice to #h ability in the online classes often coming late and rushing #h work. 10=#H progress was affected by #h attitude to online learning as #e regularly missed classes and often did not complete #h work. 11=#E did not do #s justice to #h ability with the online learning as #e needed constant reminders to attend and #e still failed to submit all the necessary work. 12=It is such a pity that #e had such a poor attitude to online learning thinking it was okay to sign in and then leave the lesson, often not submitting any work. 13=The lack of motivation to work hard and do well in school did not help when we moved online and #e struggled to attend classes and do the work. 14=Despite sending constant messages #e was unable to produce work during the online classes and this will undoubtedly affect #h progress going forward. 15=It is such a pity that #e did not respond to any offers of support with online learning and this will not help #m to achieve all #e is capable of. 16=If #e is to make up for the time #e wasted during online classes I suggest #e works on the assignments over the summer to avoid being behind next year. 17=#E will not be able to achieve all #e is capable of whilst #e tries #h best to avoid attending online classes and at least tries to complete the work. COMMENTS: Sample intro sentences 1=#N is an outstanding student who has worked very hard throughout the #Time-period and I expect #m to do well in #h exams next year. 2=#N has had a mixed #Time-period but there are signs of improvement in #h behaviour of late. 3=After a difficult start #N has done some excellent work and is now back on target. A very pleasing #Time-period. Well done #N! 4=#N is a friendly and hard-working member of the class and has put in a steady performance throughout the #Time-period. 5=Overall #N has worked very well but there are a few issues with #h time-keeping and homework that #e needs to address. 6=We have been working on the Environmental Issues module throughout the #Time-period. #N seems to enjoy this topic and has made very pleasing progress. COMMENTS: Sample project-work sentences 1=#E has worked hard this year on all of #h projects but I was especially impressed with the high-quality of #h #Science-topics assignment. 2=Project-work has been done to a minimum standard and is often handed in late. To improve #e needs to #How-to-improve. 3=Although #h #Science-topics project-work was satisfactory, I do expect #m to do more background research next time. 4=#H project-work is always excellent as demonstrated in #h #Science-topics assignment. We were all very impressed with #h creative and entertaining website designs which were an inspiration to the class. 5=#H project-work has varied considerably, however #h highly-imaginative #Science-topics project was excellent and was displayed in reception at the School Open Day. An excellent achievement #N. COMMENTS: Sample summing-up sentences 1=#N always tries #h best and has achieved a well-deserved Level #? overall. An excellent performance, keep it up! 2=#N has reached Level #?. This was #h target and #e should be proud of #s. To ensure #e keeps this up next year #e should #How-to-improve. 3=#N has achieved a Level #? overall. #E often works below #h best and with a little more effort #e could easily reach Level #?. To improve #e should #How-to-improve. 4=#N has not had the best of starts this year and is still working at Level #?. #E rarely completes #h work on time. To achieve more next year #e needs to #How-to-improve. COMMENTS: Subject01: Intro [Subject] 1=#N is a very able and enthusiastic member of the group who takes a keen interest in the Geography course and appears to enjoy all aspects of the work. 2=#N is an able and enthusiastic member of the group who takes a keen interest in the Geography course and appears to enjoy all aspects of the work. 3=#N is a lively member of the group who displays an interest in the Geography course and appears to enjoy many aspects of the work. 4=#N is a reserved member of the group who displays a quiet interest in the Geography course. 5=#N is a friendly member of the group who displays some interest in the Geography course. 6=#N is a pleasant member of the group who displays little interest in the Geography course. COMMENTS: Subject02: Contribution [Subject] 1=#H contributions to class discussion are always enthusiastic, well thought out and valuable. 2=#H contributions to class discussions are mostly well thought out and valuable. 3=#E has made efforts to contribute to class discussions and #h contributions are well thought out and valuable. 4=#E contributes to class discussions but would benefit from taking a more active role, as this would help #m to clarify #h own ideas. 5=#E rarely contributes to class discussions and would benefit from taking a more active part, as this would help #m to clarify #h own ideas. COMMENTS: Subject03: Concepts [Subject] 1=#E shows a clear grasp of even the most difficult concepts and uses terminology appropriately. 2=#E shows a clear grasp of the subject and uses terminology appropriately. 3=#E shows a good grasp of the subject but needs to be more precise in #h use of terminology. 4=#E shows a reasonable grasp of the subject but needs to be more precise in #h use of terminology. 5=#E seems to have difficulties in grasping some concepts, and is hesitant in #h use of terminology. COMMENTS: Subject04: Written work [Subject] 1=The quality of #h written work has been consistently excellent, both in terms of content and presentation. #H notes are complete and well organised. 2=The general quality of #h written work has been consistently very good, both in terms of content and presentation. 3=The general quality of #h written work has been consistently good, both in terms of content and presentation. 4=The general quality of #h written work has been good both in terms of content and presentation. However, #h needs to show more clarity in #h written work and greater care with grammar and general language usage. 5=The general quality of #h work has been satisfactory but #e needs to show more clarity in #h written work and greater care with grammar and general language usage. 6=The general quality of #h written work has been satisfactory both in terms of content and presentation. However #h notes need to be organised in order to facilitate research. 7=Written work has been rather variable - often detailed and carefully presented; but sometimes only just adequate and lacking in content. However #h notes need to be organised in order to facilitate research. 8=Although the quality of #h answers is usually very good, #e needs to work on the presentation of #h written work and on the organisation of #h notes. 9=#H written work has been very variable, occasionally very good, but too often superficial, rushed and incomplete. #N needs to complete and organise #h notes in order to facilitate research. 10=#N's notes are often incomplete and lacking in detail. #E needs to make sure #h notes are completed every lesson, #e also needs to organise #h notes in order to facilitate research. COMMENTS: Subject05: Homework [Subject] 1=#H homework is always handed in on time, completed to an excellent standard. 2=#H homework is always handed in on time, completed to a very good standard. 3=#H homework is usually handed in on time, completed to a good standard. 4=#H homework is usually handed in on time, completed to a satisfactory standard. 5=#H homework is usually handed in on time, however the quality is variable and sometimes lacking in detail. 6=#H homework is sometimes handed in on time, however the quality is variable and sometimes lacking in detail. 7=#H homework is rarely handed in on time; it is often incomplete and lacking in content. COMMENTS: Subject06: Project info [Subject] 1=Next term, #e will hand in #h completed project, the mark for which will determine #h final grade for the [Subject] course. #E has already submitted an extensive draft of #h final essay and is making excellent progress in #h project. 2=Next term, #e will hand in #h completed project, the mark for which will determine #h final grade for the [Subject] course. #E has already submitted a very good draft of #h final essay and is making pleasing progress in #h project. 3=Next term, #e will hand in #h completed project, the mark for which will determine #h final grade for the [Subject] course. #E has already submitted a good draft of #h final essay and is making pleasing progress in #h project. 4=Next term, #e will hand in #h completed project, the mark for which will determine #h final grade for the [Subject] course. #E has already submitted a reasonable draft of #h final essay and is making satisfactory progress in #h project. 5=Next term, #e will hand in #h completed project, the mark for which will determine #h final grade for the [Subject] course. #E has already submitted an unsatisfactory draft of #h final essay and is making little progress in #h project. 6=Next term, #e will hand in #h completed project, the mark for which will determine #h final grade for the [Subject] course. #E has not submitted #h draft of #h final essay and has made no progress in #h project. COMMENTS: Subject07: Project target [Subject] 1=#N should aim to maintain the high quality of #h work and continue planning and researching #h project fully. 2=#N should aim to maintain the quality of #h work and continue planning and researching #h project fully, with particular emphasis on the quality and clarity of #h written work. 3=I hope #N can sustain #h current interest in and enthusiasm towards the Extended Project course, as #e has completed #h artefact. #E now needs to complete #h write up and evaluate #h project. 4=I hope #N can maintain #h determination to understand all aspects of #h project. #E should also aim to widen #h knowledge by reading more widely around the topics and plan #h project fully. 5=#N should make an effort to be more actively involved during lessons. #E should also aim at completing #h work to the best of #h ability. 6=#E needs to be more methodical in #h approach to #h project. 7=#N needs to put more consistent effort into #h project and work harder on completing the artefact on time. 8=I would like to see #N make more effort to avoid being distracted during lessons. #E needs to put more consistent effort into #h project. 9=#E should try to improve the presentation of #h written work and keep #h enthuasiasm towards #h project. 10=#E should try to improve the quality and clarity of #h written work. 11=#E should try to improve #h attendance for greater success. COMMENTS: Subject08: Final [Subject] 1=A very impressive term of Geography, well-done! 2=Overall, an impressive term of Geography, keep up the good work! 3=Overall, a very good term. Well done! 4=Overall, a good term. 5=Overall, a satisfactory term. 6=A reasonable term overall - but #N really needs to work with more enthusiasm next term. 7=A reasonable term overall, but #N really needs to work on #h areas of weakness next term. 8=Overall, a poor year, more effort is required next term. COMMENTS: Tutor01: Opening Tutor 1=#N is an excellent student, polite, diligent, independent and self-motivated who is equally comfortable as a leader or team member. 2=#N is an able and conscientious member of the group who displays a real interest in learning and appears to enjoy all aspects of school life. 3=#N is a very good student, polite, conscientious and self motivated who works well with others. 4=#N is a very good student who has make great progress since last term. 5=#N is a good student, polite, conscientious and self motivated who works well with others. 6=#N is a reserved member of the group who displays a quiet interest towards learning and school life. 7=#N is a friendly member of the group who participates in tutor group activities with enthusiasm. 8=#N is a friendly student who works well within the tutor group. 9=#N is a student who demonstrates some enthusiasm towards school life. COMMENTS: Tutor02: Manners etc Tutor comments 1=#E is a charming and helpful member of the tutor group, who can always be relied upon to carry out any task conscientiously. 2=#E is a quiet and responsible member of the tutor group. 3=#E is a popular member of the group and has a good sense of humour. 4=#E continues to make a positive contribution to the tutor group through cheerfulness and enthusiasm. 5=#E is a pleasant and well motivated student who clearly gains much from school and gives much in return. 6=#E demonstrates a sensible and mature attitude to school life. 7=#E has an outgoing personality and is developing a wide range of interests. 8=#E shows encouraging signs of maturity and will discuss sensibly any comments about work or behaviour. 9=#E is developing self-confidence and becoming more independent in thought and action. 10=#E is developing #h self-confidence and has improved #h attitude towards learning. 11=#E is a thoughtful student who can empathise with the feelings of others. 12=#E is always prepared to listen to advice and to act upon it as a means of improving the standard of work. 13=#E approaches all school activities with care and increasing perseverance. 14=#E is becoming a more active participant in class activities. 15=#E has the ability and commitment to excel in all subjects. 16=#E is pleasant, lively and cheerful. 17=#E is polite and well mannered. 18=#E is a popular member of the group but finds it difficult to adhere to school rules, at times. 19=#E frequently has trouble adhering to school rules and working with others. 20=#E finds it difficult to work with others and generally shows a lack of respect. COMMENTS: Tutor04: subject Tutor comments 1=ADD the subject as appropriate: 2=English, Mathematics, Chemistry, Biology, Physics, History, Geography, Business Studies, Arabic, Islamic, French, Music, Art, ICT, Design Technology, Physical Education 3=#N has found the IGCSE course very challenging. 4=#N's teachers are extremely impressed with #h mature approach to learning and #e has received a very good report as a result. 5=#N's teachers are happy with #h mature approach to learning but #e needs to work on improving #h attainment in ... 6=#N's teachers are reasonable happy with #h general approach to learning but #e needs to work harder on revision greater success, especially in .... 7=#N's teachers are concerned about #h lack of effort in class, missing assignments, general lack of focus and behaviour, especially in ..... 8=#N's teachers are very concerned about #h lack of effort in class, missing assignments, general lack of focus and behaviour. 9=#N has achieved a positive set of grades in this report and should be encouraged to continue the hard work. 10=#E should note carefully the grades given to #h in this report, especially in .......... COMMENTS: Tutor05: Merits CCA Tutor comments 1=ADD INFORMATION / DELETE AS APPROPRIATE 2=I have been very impressed with #h improved attitude towards school life this term. 3=#E has demonstrated excellent self discipline during #h study lessons, helping out in the primary school and the Art Attack programme. 4=#E has demonstrated very good self discipline during #h study lessons, helping out in the primary school and the Art Attack programme. 5=#E has demonstrated good self discipline during #h study lessons, helping out in the primary school and the Art Attack programme. 6=#E has achieved #?merits this term, qualifying for the Gold certificate and has participated in the Interhouse Volleyball and Football competitions and represented RAKESS in #? . 7=#E has achieved #? merits this term, qualifying for the Silver Certificate and has participated in the Interhouse Volleyball and Football competitions and represented RAKESS in #? . 8=#E has achieved #? merits this term, qualifying for the Bronze Certificate and has participated in the Interhouse Volleyball and Football competitions and represented RAKESS in #? . 9=#E has achieved #? merits this term, working towards the Bronze Certificate and has participated in the Interhouse Volleyball and Football competitions and represented RAKESS in #? . 10=and has been an excellent participant in the Recycling Programme. 11=and the International Award and Football club. 12=#E has managed to balance #e high standard of academic work with involvement in the extra-curricular life of the school. 13=ADD the subject as appropriate: 14=English, Mathematics, Chemistry, Biology, Physics, History, Geography, Business Studies, Arabic, Islamic, French, Music, Art, ICT, Design Technology, Physical Education COMMENTS: Tutor06: Targets Tutor comments 1=#E should aim to maintain the high quality of #h work during the next few weeks, to allow for success in #h upcoming examinations. 2=I hope #e can sustain #h current interest in and enthusiasm towards #h studies during the next few weeks. 3=#E now needs to put a great amount of effort into revision to allow for success in the upcoming examinations. 4=#E must realise that self-discipline is the key to success and happiness at school. 5=#E is capable of achieving much more. 6=#E needs to develop a more mature attitude towards #e studies and work with #h teachers for greater success. 7=#E needs to develop a more positive and consistent attitude towards all #h studies and work with #h teachers for greater success. 8=#E is capable of achieving more but poor attitude and poor behaviour prevent this. 9=#E now needs to work on #h organization and focus, work harder on #h weaknesses and ask for help, when needed. LIST: Cont 1=medieval castles 2=life in medieval times 3=health and medicine in medieval times 4=the Black Death 5=medieval justice 6=the abolition of the slave trade 7=the transport of the future 8=using sources to learn about the slave trade 9=the consequences of the Industrial Revolution 10=the improvements made during the Industrial Revolution 11=life at the turn of the 20th Century 12=causes of the First World War 13=the consequences of the First World War 14=the causes of the Second World War 15=Life around the world between the two world wars 16=The consequences of the Second World War LIST: GCont 1=how different processes make different types of rock 2=how the rock cycle works and how rocks are formed 3=how people use the earth's resources and sustainability 4=how humans exploit nature and the need to conserve it 5=how more and less economically developed countries differ 6=how employment sectors affect a country's development 7=how GIS works to show layers of information 8=how population changes affect a country 9=how age distribution affects a country 10=how natural processes shape our coasts 11=how different factors cause weather and climate 12=how we can use maps to help us find places and information 13=how our planet was formed and developed over millennia 14=how the physical and human geography of Africa affect biomes LIST: GContGeog 1=how different processes make different types of rock 2=how the rock cycle works and how rocks are formed 3=how people use the earth's resources and sustainability 4=how humans exploit nature and how we can conserve it 5=how more and less economically developed countries differ 6=how employment sectors affect a country's development 7=how GIS works to show layers of information 8=how population changes affect a country 9=how age distribution affects a country 10=how natural processes shape our coasts 11=how different factors cause weather and climate 12=how we can use maps to help us find places and information 13=how our planet was formed and developed over millennia 14=how the physical and human geography of Africa affect biomes LIST: HCont 1=the achievements of Genghis Khan 2=how ancient civilisations developed 3=how castles developed in the medieval period and why 4=the the legacy of Cheng Ho 5=the causes of the Industrial Revolution 6=the effects of the Industrial Revolution 7=the reasons for and accounts of the slave trade 8=the reasons for the abolition of the slave trade 9=the causes and effects of the Opium wars in the 1800's 10=life at the turn of the 20th Century 11=the changing role of women and the suffragette movement 12=the causes and effects of the First World War 13=the history of Malaysia after the Second World War LIST: How-to-improve 1=focus more in the lessons 2=put more time aside for homework 3=try not to chat during lessons 4=do more project research on the internet 5=develop #h computer skills 6=pay more attention to instructions LIST: Science-topics 1=Heating and Cooling 2=Light and Sound 3=Exploring Magnetism 4=Changing Earth LIST: Time-period 1=year 2=semester 3=1st semester 4=2nd semester 5=3rd semester 6=4th semester 7=term 8=1st term 9=2nd term 10=3rd term 11=4th term LIST: TopicAcc 1= the fundamentals of accounting 2=how accounting affects business decisions 3=the accounting equation 4=applying the accounting equation 5=double entry book keeping 6=interpreting ledger accounts and their balances 7=understanding business documents and their use 8=understanding books of prime entry 9=using books of prime entry 10=preparation of the trial balance 11=the uses and limitations of the trial balance 12=the correction of errors 13=use and purpose of a bank statement 14=the preparation of a bank reconciliation statement 15=capital expenditure and revenue expenditure 16=the importance of matching costs and revenues 17=irrecoverable debts and provision for doubtful debts 18=valuation of Inventory 19=Preparation of financial statements 20=accounting ratios LIST: TopicBus 1=the purpose and nature of business activity 2=how business size can be measured 3=the types of business organisation 4=business objectives and stakeholder objectives 5=the importance of, and methods for, motivating a workforce 6=how businesses are organised and managed 7=methods of recruitment, selection and training of employees 8=effective internal and external communication in business 9=functional area of human resources 10=the techniques of market segmentation 11=the methods used to improve productivity 12=the different costs of production and break-even analysis 13=the methods of achieving quality in the production process 14=why and how accounts are used. 15=the distinctions between niche and mass markets 16=marketing strategies to influence consumer decisions 17=the meaning and methods of production 18=how productivity can be increased. 19=finance and accounting 20=external influences on businesses LIST: TopicEcon 1=the nature of the economic problem 2=the difference between economic goods and free goods. 3=the factors of production and their rewards 4=the quantity and quality of the factors of production 5=the definition and examples of opportunity cost 6=the influence of opportunity cost on decision making 7=drawing and interpretation of appropriate diagrams 8=the significance of the location of production points. 9=the difference between microeconomics and macroeconomics 10=fiscal policy 11=economic growth 12=inflation and deflation 13=comparing living standards and income distribution 14=the causes of poverty 15=the factors that affect population growth 16=differences in economic development between countries 17=international specialisation 18=globalisation, free trade and protection 19=foreign exchange rates 20=current account of balance of payments LIST: TopicHist 1=the causes of the first world war 2=what the leaders wanted from the peace treaties of 1919-23 3= the fairness of the peace treaties of 1919-23 4=the consequences of 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