/* SAVE YOURSELF HOURS... /* IMPORT THESE COMMENTS INTO: SchoolReportWriter.COM /* No.1 in GOOGLE - "BEST TEACHER REPORTS APP": /* - TRUSTED by 1000s of teachers, since 2012 /* - QUICKLY create personalised reports /* - PASTE into your school system, Word etc /* - GENDER NEUTRAL option /* - DEMO video at SchoolReportWriter.COM /* FOR HELP see end of this document. /* Subjects: History, Psychology, Tutor Group COMMENTS: Comments on work 1=I hope #N will continue #h fantastic work next term. 2=I think it is important that #N regains #h focus for the remainder of the term. We are currently deciding how the Berlin Wall changed the lives of people living there. 3=As #N has not yet achieved #h target, I hope that #e can achieve #h target in the coming weeks. 4=As #N has not yet achieved #h target, #h will need to work hard next term in an attempt to achieve #h end of year target in the coming weeks. 5=Despite being distracted at times, #N has worked well to achieve #h end of term target. #E is a joy to teach and has produced some fantastic work throughout the term. 6=In the final few weeks of the term, I hope that #N will continue #h good effort in History. 7=For next term, I hope #N can avoid chatting needlessly and engage fully in the work. 8=#N has had a good year in History; keep up the good work #N! 9=Approach each lesson with the attitude that during the lesson the focus is on learning rather than socialising. COMMENTS: Group work 1=During group work, #N helps others in a very friendly way and makes a brilliant leader in group work. 2=#N must be sure to be listening when instructions are given out. The only reason I that #e may not be listening is because #e is either talking about the work, completing a previous task or helping someone else. While I do not wish to discourage #m from doing this, #e just needs to be a little more aware. 3=#N must realise that group work is not an opportunity for #m to chat. 4=#N's contribution, following group work, to our Atomic Bomb debate was fantastic. I was so impressed by #N ability to argue and justify their opinion in the debate. I would encourage #N to use the same skills in #h written work. 5=#N must ensure that #e is fully focused in lessons 6=#N often plays a key role during group work and contributes well to class discussions. COMMENTS: History comments 1=#E has produced some very good pieces of work this year in history and #e has enjoyed finding out about the lives of people in Roman times and has been able to discuss the ways the Roman people lived. #E has produced written work and drawings of a good standard to reflect #h knowledge and #e has selected information from several sources and used these effectively. 2=#E has produced some nice pieces of work in history and has enjoyed finding out about the lives of people in Roman times. #E is now able to research #h information independently from a wider range of sources. 3=#E has produced some lovely pieces of work this year in history and is able to research #h information independently from a wide range of sources. #E has worked hard in this subject and has enjoyed finding out about the lives of people in Roman times. 4=#E has worked steadily and shown that #e has a developing knowledge of historical time. #E is able to research #h information independently from a wider range of sources. 5=#E has produced some very good pieces of work this year in history and #e has enjoyed finding out about the lives of people in the 1500s and has been able to discuss the ways these people lived and looked after their children. #E has produced written work and drawings of a good standard to reflect #h knowledge and #e has selected information from several sources and used these effectively. 6=#E has produced some lovely pieces of work this year in history and is able to research #h information independently from a wide range of sources. #E has worked hard in this subject and has enjoyed finding out about the lives of people in the 16th century. 7=#E has produced some nice pieces of work in history and has enjoyed finding out about the lives of people in the 16th century. COMMENTS: Homework 1=#E has worked hard this year on all of #h homework but I was especially impressed with the high-quality of #h #Science-topics assignment. 2=Homework has been done to a minimum standard and is often handed in late. To improve #e needs to #How-to-improve. 3=Although #h homework was satisfactory, I do expect #m to do more background research next time. 4=#H homework is always excellent, handed in on time and done to an excellent standard. 5=#H project-work has varied considerably, however #h work on Julius Caesar is on display in the classroom. COMMENTS: Homework 1 1=#E has worked hard this year on all of #h homework. 2=Homework has been done to a minimum standard and is often handed in late. To improve #e needs to #How-to-improve. 3=Although #h homework was satisfactory, I do expect #m to do more background research next time. 4=#H homework is always excellent, done well and handed in on time. 5=#H homework has varied considerably, however #h work on Julius Caesar is on display in the classroom. COMMENTS: In achieving 1=#E has shown that #e has good explaining skills. #N must now work to ensure they are analysing texts and sources to consider their reliability. 2=#E failure to reach #h end of year target has been because of #h lack of focus in lessons. This is because #h is often too busy trying to talk to other members of the class and distracts #s. 3=#E can produce good work. However, #e prevents #s from doing so by being distracted by those around #h. 4=#E often provides a lot of information in #h answers and explanations; although, it is not always relevant to the question. 5=#E is a very likeable student; although, #h work is often hindered by #h chatting. #N is an excellent historian who will regularly complete the work in less detail than #e is truly capable of. 6=#E is an extremely able and enthusiastic member of the class who takes a keen interest in History and appears to enjoy most aspects of the work. 7=#E has been successful in analysing a range of sources to produce a structure argument. #E is capable of developing #h descriptive writing into a good explanation. To improve, #N will need to justify #h own opinion using sources and historical facts to back up #h conclusions. 8=#E has shown a good ability to identify and describe information from sources, events and societies. #N must now aim to consider the impact and really develop this in #h explanations. 9=#E is extremely hard working and with this has made good progress this year. 10=#E is a superbly hard-working member of the class. #E rarely gives up on a challenge and once #h mind set on completing #h work #h focus is soling on doing #h best. 11=#E needs to consider the importance of events, changes in societies and the impact these have upon the people of the time. 12=#E has not reached their end of year target. #E needs to focus more upon the tasks set and ensure that #e is showing #h true potential at all times. 13=#E has worked extremely hard in lessons, #h has an extremely conscientious approach to History and #h work is always a joy to read. Not only is it historically correct, #N has the ability to convince the reader into agreeing with their argument. COMMENTS: In class 1=In class, #e consistently produce fantastic work. 2=During lessons, #e can be guilty of becoming distracted too much. 3=I feel, despite #h achievements this year, #e can achieve even higher by focusing more in lessons and listening to the task first time. 4=In lessons, #e is a quiet student. I would encourage #m to contribute some of the fantastic ideas #e has written down to class discussions. 5=#E must apply #s better in lessons. 6=In lessons, #e works well and consistently produces good work. COMMENTS: Intro sentence 1=#N has had a mixed term but there are signs of improvement in #h progress of late. 2=#N has made steady progress throughout the term. #E has worked well towards #h end of term target. 3=#N has worked well towards #h end of term target; whilst #N has not achieved it yet, I fully expect #m to be on target within the next few weeks. 4=#N has not produced the work I would expect of someone of #h ability. I expect #N to improve #h focus in order to make progress in history. 5=#N is a conscientious student who applies #s well to any challenge presented to #m. 6=#N is a joy to teach and consistently puts #h best efforts into #h classwork. 7=#N is an excellent student. #E is thoughtful in #h work and provides excellent answers in #h work. 8=#N works well some lessons; although, the lack of consistency in #h approach to history means that #h progress has not been as good as it could have been. 9=#N has successfully achieved #h target; although, I hope in the coming weeks, #e can really push #s to achieve an even higher grade. 10=#N has not yet managed to achieve #h end of term target. 11=#N spends too much time involving #s in idle chatter, which prevents #h making the progress I would expect from a student with #h ability. 12=#N is a very capable student. #E can be guilty of chatting too much on occasions but generally works quite well. 13=#N is a friendly student who is capable of working well, and regularly contributes to class discussion. #N does, however, tend to get distracted, resulting in careless mistakes or failing to complete the work set. 14=#N can be a hard working member of the class and at times contributes some superb answers. #E does, however, tend to rush at #h work, resulting in careless mistakes. 15=#N has not quite managed to achieve #s target; however, I hope by the end of the year #e will have achieved it. 16=#N is an extremely hard working student with an enthusiastic approach to #h studies. 17=#N has worked extremely hard to achieve above #h end of term target. 18=#N was worked consistently well to achieve #h challenge target. 19=#N has successfully managed to achieve #h end of term target; although, #e is capable of achieving #h challenge target. COMMENTS: Sample intro sentences 1=#E is an outstanding student who has worked very hard throughout the term. 2=#E has had a mixed term but there are signs of improvement in #h behaviour of late. 3=After a difficult start #e has done some excellent work and is now back on target. A very pleasing term. 4=#E is a friendly and hard-working member of the class and has put in a steady performance throughout the term. 5=Overall, #e has worked very well but there are a few issues with #h homework that #e needs to address. 6=Overall, #e has worked very well but there are a few issues with being too chatty that #e needs to address. 7=Overall, #e has worked very well but there are a few issues with #h time-keeping that #e needs to address. 8=We have been working on the Roman period throughout the term. #E seems to enjoy this topic and has made very pleasing progress. 9=#N has worked very well this term and has produced some pleasing work. COMMENTS: Sample project-work sentences 1=#E has worked hard this year on all of #h projects but I was especially impressed with the high-quality of #h #Science-topics assignment. 2=Project-work has been done to a minimum standard and is often handed in late. To improve #e needs to #How-to-improve. 3=Although #h #Science-topics project-work was satisfactory, I do expect #m to do more background research next time. 4=#H project-work is always excellent as demonstrated in #h #Science-topics assignment. We were all very impressed with #h creative and entertaining website designs which were an inspiration to the class. 5=#H project-work has varied considerably, however #h highly-imaginative #Science-topics project was excellent and was displayed in reception at the School Open Day. An excellent achievement #N. COMMENTS: Sample summing-up sentences 1=#E always tries #h best and has achieved a well-deserved grade in end of term exams. An excellent performance, keep it up! 2=#E has reached #h target and #e should be proud of #s. To ensure #e keeps this up next year #e should #How-to-improve. 3=#E often works below #h best and with a little more effort #e could easily reach a good grade. To improve #e should #How-to-improve. 4=#E has not had the best of starts this year and is still working below #h ability. #E rarely completes #h work on time. To achieve more next year #e needs to #How-to-improve. { COMMENTS: Summing up sentence 1=I hope #N will continue #h fantastic work next term. 2=I think it is important that #N regains #h focus for next term. 3=As #N has not yet achieved #h target, I hope that #e can achieve #h target next term. 4=As #N has not yet achieved #h target, #h will need to work hard next term in an attempt to achieve #h target. 5=#N needs to revise for tests more thoroughly. 6=Despite being distracted at times, #N has worked well to achieve #h end of term target. #E is a joy to teach and has produced some fantastic work throughout the term. 7=In the final few weeks of the term, I hope that #N will continue #h good effort in History. 8=For next term, I hope #N can avoid chatting needlessly and engage fully in the work. 9=#N has had a good year in History; keep up the good work #N! 10=#N should ensure #e keeps #h focus next term and revise thoroughly for tests. 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